Nice composition Darren. I feel you are still trying to get "too much" into your images though! I don't know if you have any editing software but if you have you could make extra copies of your pics and crop them in different ways to see how they would look!!
Good suggestion there from Cathy, also this might have beeen better with camera held in 'landscape' and a wider view maybe. But as said before nothing will help you better than practise. Take several shots of each subject with different angles etc. I expect your camera will have come with a cd of instructions, and will probably contain an editing software program of sorts. Give it a whirl but nake sure to make copies of any images so you refer back to the. I always work on a a copy in Photoshop.
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